Overall James I thought you made an interesting speech that was appealing to your audience when you delivered it in class. You would need to go back and tidy up some of the sentences, grammar and punctuation, but despite all those things, you delivered it with enthusiasm and expression.
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Overall James I thought you made an interesting speech that was appealing to your audience when you delivered it in class. You would need to go back and tidy up some of the sentences, grammar and punctuation, but despite all those things, you delivered it with enthusiasm and expression.
Miss H
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