In the holidays I went to a sushi resteraunt with my my family for dinner. As soon as I walked in the room I smelled an aroma of fresh fish.Then he waitor showed us to our booth.When I got there I was puzzled by the instant dilemma of which ones to have.Finally I settled on some sushi.I had to wait for a long time and I was really bored.When it finally came I was so happy.After that time shot by like a flaming rocket!Soon we had to go I was really sad because it tasted so good.
1 comment:
This is a nice snapshot of a family outing James. I would like you to go back and edit the piece for spelling and punctuation. Don't forget to leave a space after the full stop before starting a new sentence. Keep up the independent writing James.
Miss H
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